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by Kips Sep 12, 2011
Life, society /
meaning of life
We've come from different places,
We've come in different sizes,
We've come in different colors;
We've come with different attributes,
Yet we somehow fit into the picture.
We have different dreams,
We have different inspirations,
We have different desires;
We have different aspirations,
Yet they all compute to one picture.
We are created by one creator,
We are created for one another,
We are created as one people;
We are created for one purpose,
And we make up one big picture.
We live to Love God,
We live to worship Him;
We live to Love others,
We live to serve them,
We make up one perfect picture.
The picture of God's Love!
by Yrem Crish
In my first impression I feel that this piece is annoying because of the repetitions of the first words but as I reading your poem the vividness draw me to continually read your whole poem. It's really great. Good job!
I love this, it has os much meaning, and many can relate to it, I don't see anything wrong with it, I love it, great job, 100/100
Thanks for the reviews
I like the repetition here. Kinda fits for my tastes. The message as well is clear. Great job :)