Simply astounding and incredible. I love the provoking imagery that you use in this poem as it brings each stanza to life with the almost real visuals and feelings. Your emotions are pure in yiur message and you speak your heart, which I believe makes a poem, truly, a poem. Of course I can understand your fear of being hurt or losing this peron and that leads you to be wary in giving into something you know will have you captivated and make you feel truly loved.
I really couldn't decide which stanza I liked best since they both spoke to me in a amazing way. The imagery is brilliant and amazing. Gave me a clear image of how you feel and how he feels. It's clear to see your catious approach to him and even your withdrawal at times. Yet, this person stays and promises you everything and even though you push away at times he still comes back.
All in all, I am amazed that even though I have been gone for ao long you still have kept your amazing talent of captivating truths and the hardship of going through them. I hope to read more of your amazing works. Great job and keep writing!
Wow Nana I love this... I love your imagination and your way with words... your metaphors are enlightening and are just lovely to read... the last sentence was so simple yet so deep... I think this poem was just amazing to read and I enjoyed it...
Actually it reminded me of my poem "Don't Pull Away" lol kind of like the opposite! Great job sweetie!