Slow Hand/ Conway Twitty

by Cinnamonspice   Oct 18, 2011

Breathless anticipation
grows in slow progression
of absolute sinful pleasure
that screams for satisfaction.

Tremors shake my falter
pushing me forward, rushing
my resolution of desire as
shock waves crash over me .

The slow touch of his hand
radiates warmth through out,
dissolving my inner strength
augmenting passions need.

Eyes closed floating, falling
deep into a hypnotic trance,
given permission to devour
and succumb to inner trust.

_Song contest_


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  • 6 years ago

    by mandy

    A very sweet, warm write. 5/5

    mandy :)

  • 6 years ago

    by nourayasmine

    OMG I cannot even move my hands, wait how can I type? I am typing with my elbows!
    Yes! I cannot even ....ok that's enough.

    That was TOO sensual for a cold girl like me, I feel I'm sometimes just so cold-hearted, I don't have that..passion?
    well, you just aroused my 6 senses! lol

    Connie, connie, you are amazing, Connie! I swear that I adored this piece I feel sorry that I haven't read it before. :P

    Keeepppp writinggggg. Love ya.

  • 6 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    Connie wow i loved it soooo passionate sensual ... you had me all through that poem congrates on your win .... your talent is soring high... shinning like the golden phenoix taking over in the sky. :D

  • 6 years ago

    by A lonely soul

    Agree with all the comments above. But do we have the definition right? Here are the literary meanings:

    Passion - a powerful or compelling emotion or feeling; strong amorous feeling or desire; strong sexual desire; lust.
    Desire - to wish or long for; crave or want; sexual appetitie or a sexual urge.
    Sensual- gratification of the senses or appetites; carnal; fleshy; arousing or exciting.
    Hot - sexually aroused; lustful.
    Steamy - lustful or erotic.
    Spice - something that gives zest; to season; to add flavor.

    Perhaps, the write can educate us better, whether this was steamy, sensual or passionate.
    Great write, as always. Just surprising coming from you.

  • 6 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    A very sensual write yet there is some softness to it that I like. Very passionate indeed! Liked the read.