Wow I really enjoyed reading this poem! I love the use of the fantasy characters such as the fairy queen, witches and ghosts :)
I like the metaphors you have selected it really is a credit to this piece making it very effective and enjoyable to read!
Happy Halloween my Friend :) Hope you had a good time!
5/5 from me
I really enjoyed reading this poem because your words obviously show that this is written from the heart. I loved your detailed descriptions and I think you did a good job writing this. There isn't really anything I would fault and it actually made me smile, which is always good. You did a great job once again. :)