Mirrored Tears (Sedoka)

It's been a while since I read a Sedoka poem, and you have done a wonderful job with this form.

How touching and sad ... you have written them so beautifully.
/Crystal tears on broken glass
Mirrored by their loneliness

// I loved the imagery of crystal tears and broken glass.

A very thoughtful poem, crisp and transparent imagery. Your poems are very motivational, i admire your choice of words. Sad moments can't be escaped in as much as the precaution taken.. Fate can't be avoided, you literally made the reader feel the agony of the subject through your words. Very CREATIVE! Be blessed.

A very thoughtful poem, crisp and transparent imagery. Your poems are very motivational, i admire your choice of words. Sad moments can't be escaped in as much as the precaution taken.. Fate can't be avoided, you literally made the reader feel the agony of the subject through your words. Very CREATIVE! Be blessed.

I don't know why but I can only see a small little helpless girl crying..at an age where she is supposed to laugh and play, she is burdened with pain and grief..touching write.