Wow this poem is kinda painful to read since i went through this in a way in my past but overall this poem is VERY well written and it shows the talent of the poet by the diction he/she writes and the way the images pop out and call to you in this poem both the emotions and the images came into view beautifully! :) 5/5
Ah, love, love, why must you be so tough,
tough to find in someone who is worth?
interesting read, I have to say that the way this poem is structure surprised me.. I thought that perhaps it had syllable count but then I count some syllables and I found that it wasn't. So then I thought, perhaps its counting words, but haha. At the end I gave up and I just enjoyed the read. Well written.
The heart is very fragile and easily can be
broken. Somehow we find a reason to forgive. However, there comes a time
we need to put our happiness first and
a beautiful poem and written with so