I read a beautiful message, but I do have to say that I feel the form restricted your words on some parts.
And makes it read a little shaky. But what I like the most is the message and your tone of voice. I feel the voice speaking directly to the reader
I've read a quote that is very similar to this... I think it was along the lines of this:
""The woman came from a man's rib. Not from his feet to be walked on. Not from his head to be superior, but from the side to be equal. Under the arm to be protected. And next to the heart to be loved."
I like the metaphor of a woman being like glass, very fragile...and how God counts women's tears.