by A Poets Handwriting aka ALISHA Sep 14, 2012
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
As the rain melts away, upon the horizon |
Thank you. (: |
by Amy
This is one of the shortest poems I have read that I really like. The images created in my mind is so calming and serene, I could see it so vividly in my head. I think this is one of those poems that is worth coming back to. |
by Melpomene
I really like the idea of rain melting away, I'm not sure if I've heard that before. Of course it does melt with the sun but I still can't recall ever seeing it in poetry. |
Thanks Britt, glad you liked it. (: |
by Britt
This was an extremely elegant way of describing a rainbow. Typically we hold so many cliches with rainbows, but here you didn't take those meanings, rather just explained the formation. Such creativity. |