by East Poetry Nov 5, 2012
category :
Life, society /
faith, religion
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The Epic birth of Gods great Son, |
by Rusheena
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A few lines that speaks volumes! Great job! |
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As always very diverse unified words, deep, yet above many |
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I like the different types of rhyming in your poem, both at ends of phrases and inside the phrases like "pure" with "endure" and "it wasn't" with "it wouldn't" and "no decay" with "no array". These types of rhyming are most adorable by readers. The ending of poem is superior with the word "eternity". |
by Amreen
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Great one. The emotions are vivid despite the length. Love it:) |
by LostWords
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This is great, such a sweet topic! I loved it. |