I like the different types of rhyming in your poem, both at ends of phrases and inside the phrases like "pure" with "endure" and "it wasn't" with "it wouldn't" and "no decay" with "no array". These types of rhyming are most adorable by readers. The ending of poem is superior with the word "eternity".
Randy you have penned a short poem extracted from your experience and proved that you are a highly talented expert. Thank you for sharing that with us.