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by PinkyPrincess Mar 8, 2013
Sadness, depression /
I remember when nostalgia crawled up to me at dusk,
and the ice-cold memories wafted into my body.
He was what I lived and breathed for.
Without him - I'm missing my oxygen.
Replaying his words in my head
still make me shiver in a panic.
His heartless, stabbing phrases
are tattooed on my arm, as a reminder.
I loathe him even though I still love him.
How can I feel two conflicting emotions
at the exact same time?
He didn't deserve my love.
I was young and naive,
and let him take everything,
my heart, my life, my innocence.
I punch myself daily for it.
Though my heart is currently on pause,
I pray that one day it will beat again.
The melancholic tone just captivated me. I love this piece Sara <333
I love this poem. your words are very heart felt and your emotions are amazing. Just remember that time heals everything. 5/5
by Tara Kay
Sara, I love this....the emotion is just inevitably cast to give me goosebumps and feel a little melancholic, without distracting the greatness of each line,
I want to pick out a part that I loved, but I love it all, it's totally crafted so well...almost flawlessly flow throughout...
You're awesome :) x
Awww thanks Tara!! Glad you liked it!! I wrote this poem for the 7 Day Contest by Colm... so I'm glad it turned out well since most of my contest poems aren't so good!
You're more awesome :*