Darkness

by Dakota   Jun 24, 2013


Out of the shadows stepped a figure cloaked in darkness.
He said,"come with me for i need your help kind sir."
I took a step toward him and he gave me a wicked grin.
He said,"there's a good boy," and gave a laugh quite heartless.
I took a step back and tried to talk, but my speech was a slur.
It was then that i noticed the odd drip off his chin.
It was blood coming from his two sharpest teeth.
I stood there in the snow, quite immobilized by shock.
This guy had killed something, of that i was sure.
His gums slide up with a sickening slick right into a sheathe,
the last thing i said was," what the truck?"
there was a body, not four feet away, and it was a her.

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  • 10 years ago

    by MARVIN PRIZE

    Quite a good poem, reflection of pure creativity and imagination.

  • 10 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    I love this one, so much in it to speak out to the reader, I nominated it for the weekly poetry contest, good luck :)

  • 10 years ago

    by Daylight Lucidity

    Interesting, very mysterious. I like how it kind of read like a story, in a way. It flowed very well, I like this.

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