Comments : Lee

  • 4 years ago

    by Alanis

    This Is very good! You are very descriptive, keep writing angel, you have a bright future here ^^

    • 4 years ago

      by Mark

      Oh thankyou so much :0)

  • 4 years ago

    by Skys Gal

    Wow I love it, so many angles to praise, wonderful poem, I cant wait to read more :) Two thumbs up

    • 4 years ago

      by Mark


  • 4 years ago

    by WintersAngel

    Oh, wow!!!! This completely captured my attention, I couldn't tear my eyes away fir a second. The style of your writing is simply perfect for this piece. Just amazing, I can't wait to read more!!!!

    • 4 years ago

      by Mark

      Thankiez =o)

  • Simply amazing I loved it it should be in a poetry book looking forward to more its such a great read keep up the amazing work :)

  • 4 years ago

    by The Queen

    This is a brilliant piece written by a talented poet.

    Welcome to the site!

  • 4 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Mark this piece is absolutely breathtaking, truly enjoyed the read.... Welcome to PnQ :-)

    I truly wish I could nominate this piece, however it has to be recently submitted and its over the date time frame. I will keep my eye out on your work, very beautiful piece!!

  • 4 years ago

    by Meme

    WOW!! Your talent is amazing.

    The inner rhyme and the story telling technique you adopted were spot on for such a piece, you helped the reader to see what you were seeing and to feel the surroundings of that place. It gave me chills at some parts and it kept me intrigued wanting to know more and more.

    I enjoyed the journey through your words.
    Keep the talent up, and welcome to PnQ :)

  • 4 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This kept me on the edge of my seat

    You could write a Novel

  • 4 years ago

    by Tammy R Carllile

    What an incredible journey this poem took me on. My great grandfather had a book of poetry, that now sets in a museum. This poem should have been in it. Thank you for taking me into your mind.

  • 4 years ago

    by stacy

    Very descriptive ! love the juicy details . on the whole just a very good read !!!!!!! keep up the good work !!!! :)

  • 2 years ago

    by Dancing Rivers

    This is incredibly written, chilling but invigorating. Lovely to read something so personal but so different veined.

  • 2 years ago

    by Maher

    This is epic. I thoroughly enjoyed it. I sent feedback through a private message as it is a little detailed - I hope it's the kind of thing you're after. But in all honesty, this is a great piece. I could even hear background music as I was reading! Great stuff mate :)

  • 1 year ago

    by Artdistree

    Epic story/poem you should write a novel - excellent

  • 11 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Oh my, I think of Edgar Allan Poe all the time I was reading this. Wow, I commend you, and I am in awe of how you have wonderfully told this chilling story in poetic rhyme. It's a masterpiece. Added to faves.

  • 10 months ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Wow! I've never read anything quite like this! I wish could think of something clever to say ... other than ... it was totally enthralling. How clever!

  • 10 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    An Excellent piece. I like the story and the rhyming and agree with the previous comments an eerie tale that was enthralling. I think you have a talent for this genre

  • 9 months ago

    by Mahesh Kachare

    What a great piece of poem

  • 9 months ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Seems i am stubbling into all your work today - and BOY this was a read.. However I just wanted it to keep going.. Its excellent!

    fantastic rhyming throughout, eerie, chilling, yet i was unable to stop..
    Truley captivating!

    Well done Mark.

  • 9 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A long read but held me all the way. Very good work, Mark.

    Take care and all the best,