Dear Eyes of Hope

by Rania Moallem   Jan 5, 2014

Dear Eyes of Hope

You awaken inside of me
the lazy petals that
have been cuddling themselves in cold.

Like a fair morning gesture
you rise, you rise like a sun,
sneaking like a breeze of light
into the core of my heart.

And I breathe you in
like a fresh breath
that cleanse me to the soul.

You're that stream of hope
that can water
the wild thirst of meadows,
and mine are dry.
You revive them,
You give them warmth,
and that green touch of color.

But most of all
as you breathe,
you bring them back to life
..which brings life back,
right back to me,
almost before I sink in your
words of love,
almost before I die in your
eyes of hope.

But hey, I'm blind,
and you are my eyes,
my eyes of hope.

by: Rania Hani Moallem


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  • 4 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    You sure do know how to lay out your affections interwoven with natures elements. I had a smile across my face while reading this. Whenever I read from you, I learn something new. You're so gifted dear, ma sha Allah. Your poetry defines the impeccable grace and virtue of poetry.

    I tried to interpret each stanza based on my perception.

    What I understood from this adorable love poem, is how much the existence of love, revives your very existence. From the title one can deduce, the subject as your driving force that motivates and renews your love vows.

    1st, 2nd &3rd Stanza:
    This persons love encapsulates your heart in his/her shell, with their loving and caring features.
    It restores your spirit and brightens your heart with their devotion.
    As such it wipes off your impurities and rejuvenates you in entirety.

    4th Stanza:
    It nurtures your survival and adds a radiance to your life. Thus, balancing and coloring your world in total color of love and harmony.
    That gesture of love is like a wand that lightens your path. It ignites your spirit and surges hope into you.

    5th and 6th Stanza:
    You see through this subjects unconditional love for you. You breed your love due to this persons distinctive presence in your life, as you see love through his/her faithful eyes.

    As usual very well though out. You don't need a soothsayer to affirm that. I miss your writes, honestly.
    More wisdom to you.
    Kudos! Tabarakallah!

    • 4 years ago

      by Rania Moallem

      Yakori that was more than just accurate. You have a pretty very remarkable sensation! I just adore your analysis. Thanks a lot for the magnificent feedback

  • 4 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    I really love this poem

  • 5 years ago

    by Meme

    And I miss you :)

  • 5 years ago

    by Meme

    I honestly miss how you write, and especially when they are love poems. Yours are so rare that it takes ages for one of them to be written, and they never fail to captivate me!