NAKED APHRODITE-GODDESS!!!

by Robert Gardiner   Jan 29, 2014


(These are alternative versions of the same poem It was originally titled Naked Aphrodite, and was about the Goddess Aphrodite. It's opening line regaling her sea birth "Rising, from the sea, Naked, a Vision, of Such Loveliness", but I decided to do a new version that could Herald Any Goddess, Any Beautiful, Alluring Woman.that did So Captivate, and so I changed a few line, to Honor Any Goddess (Bewitching Woman). Let me know hat you thing of the poem. Your comment and votes are greatly appreciated, thank you.)

NAKED APHRODITE!!!

Rising, from the sea, Naked, a Vision, of Such Loveliness,
Perfection Personified, Pleasure, Incarnate,
The Embodiment, of Grace and Femininity,
Enamored, she leaves me, Engrossed in, Such Ecstasy,
Spelled, by Her Charms, a Flutter, all of me,
Exhilarated, Engrossed, in Affinity.
What Rapture, Her Presence is.
Wrapped, I am, within, Her Magic.

Naked Goddess, Your Body's, Divine,
Amorous thoughts of you, Dance, in my Mind.
So Seductive, Your Siren Song,
Your Naked Splendor, Transfixing, to Gaze Upon.
So Lovely, Your Silhouette,
Each and Every Inch of you, just, Flawless.
Beckoned, I am, to Your Shore,
Fascinated, by your Body's Every Contour.

You Define, Beauty, Your Face, a Most Lovely Sight,
In concert, with Your Body, a Rapturous, Delight.
Such Heaven, the Beauteous, Bare Body, of you.
Haunted, I am, By Your Each and Every Hue.
A Fancy, you have, My Heart,
A Flamed, My Soul, Each and Every Part.
I'm Lost, within, the Majesty, of you.
Naked Enchantress, Such Rhapsody, You Induce...

Robert Gardiner
R.G.Love

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NAKED GODDESS!!!

Haunting My Dreams, Naked, a Vision, of Such Loveliness,
Perfection Personified, Pleasure, Incarnate,
The Embodiment, of Grace and Femininity,
Enamored, she leaves me, Engrossed in, Such Ecstasy,
Spelled, by Her Charms, a Flutter, all of me,
Exhilarated, Engrossed, in, Affinity.
What Rapture, Her Presence is.
Wrapped, I am, within, Her Magic.

Naked Magnificence, Your Body's, Divine,
Amorous thoughts of you, Dance, in my Mind.
So Seductive, Your Siren Song,
Your Naked Splendor, Transfixing, to Gaze Upon.
So Lovely, Your Silhouette,
Each and Every Inch of you, Simply, Perfect.
Beckoned, I am, to Your Shore,
Fascinated, by your Body's Every Contour.

Venus,Aphrodite, No Goddess, To Eclipse You.
No Euphoria, Fancy, Like That, Which You Induce,
Engrossing, So, Your Naked Form.
Such Enchantment,Within Me, It Beauty Spawns.

You Define, Beauty, Your Face, a Most Lovely Sight,
In concert, with Your Body, a Rapturous, Delight.
Such Heaven, the Beautiful, Bare Body, of you,
Bewitched, I am, By Your Each and Every Hue.
A Fancy, you have, My Heart,
A Flamed, My Soul, Each and Every Part.
I'm Lost, within, the Majesty, of you.
Naked Enchantress, Such Rhapsody, You Induce...

Robert Gardiner
R.G.Love

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  • 10 years ago

    by Mohan

    Lovely write....

  • 10 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Except for some word changes between the two versions, the rhyme and smoothness makes the read enchanting. I do like the second version better though. All in all, whatever you write about turns out nice. Keep penning and take care.