by John Doe Jan 1, 2015
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
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He used to sit there, |
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The story was nice to read, I did think it was forced at times and I really enjoy free verse it's so much more easier to read and to get and to enjoy 4/5 |
by Everlasting
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Very good, the rhymes and a few other things may still need some work but I love what you are doing with your writing. Keep writing. This was a Contemplative write. I like it. |
by John Doe
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Thank you ! |