Woman, You Spell With, Rhapsody, Sublime... (A Sonnet)

by Robert Gardiner   Feb 25, 2015

This is a Poem/Sonnet I composes per the parameters and guideline of "Rhyme Scheme, Rhythm, & Metering Challenge (Exercise)" {http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/discussion/topic.html?topic_id=144028};

Woman, You Spell With, Rhapsody, Sublime... (A Sonnet)

Woman, You Spell With, Rhapsody, Sublime,
Enwrap, In A Whirlwind, Of Butterflies.
Uplift, With Ecstasy, Unto, The Skies.
Fascinated, You Leave Me, Every Time.

No Such Heaven, As That, Which You Bestow.
With Bewitchment, Rapture, You Thrill, My Soul.
Mesmerized, I'm Left, Captivated, Whole.
I'm Drawn, To The Siren Song, You Bellow.

A Flutter, You Leave Me, My Heart, In Flight
There's Nothing, Quite Like, Your Wonder, Divine.
Besotted, You Leave Me, Just, Stupefied.

Enamored, I Am, Enthralled With, Delight,
By Every Inch Of You, Left On, Cloud Nine,
Engrossed, In The Pleasure, By You, Supplied...

Meter: Pentameter
Rhythm: Mixed

Robert Gardiner


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  • 3 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Judging Comment

    This is one of the most elegant sonnets I have read in quite some time! Robert has crafted a gem here!

    His iambic pentameter is elegant and very rhythmic!

    Very magical and spirited, the love and beauty of this woman is felt within the entire piece! Just beautiful!!

  • 3 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    I liked your word choice but there are too many unecessary commas in this poem.

  • 3 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Nice...you are really good with these Sonnets. The rhythm, rhyme and feelings just flow...well penned!

  • 3 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Beautiful, Robert!