by Robert Gardiner Feb 25, 2015
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
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This is a Poem/Sonnet I composes per the parameters and guideline of "Rhyme Scheme, Rhythm, & Metering Challenge (Exercise)" {http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/discussion/topic.html?topic_id=144028}; |
by Maple Tree
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Judging Comment |
by Rachel RTVW
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I liked your word choice but there are too many unecessary commas in this poem. |
by Meena Krish
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Nice...you are really good with these Sonnets. The rhythm, rhyme and feelings just flow...well penned! |
by Maple Tree
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Beautiful, Robert! |