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by Poetess Dec 31, 2015
There were no children in his home.Only vessels.
Empty vessels full of holes.
Full of holes that caused them
to fill to the brim with secrets.
With secrets too briny; too heavy
so they sank and they sank.
They sank into darkness-
where only he could reach.
He could reach when he wanted,
but they were useless to him.
To him the best vessels
were pristine and intact. Intact until he used them so much
that he filled them with holes
that filled with secrets too heavy
--No... we were never children
in his home.
by Jyoti Rawat
Very nice lots meaning in this poems.
Empty vessels with hole....................
Wow very powerful. I was captured from start to finish so heart wrenching and the meaning so sad ðŸ˜¢
by Maple Tree
Poetess paints such a sad poem this week, in true creative form and style. I was so touched when I read this. the angle she took with this was very unique. I was blown away!
by End Of Eternity
Congratulations on your win dear Liz.
Did read it long time back but just couldn't comment then.
Really loved everything abt this one.
Very painful but the way you portrayed the picture...simply outstanding.
Well deserved win :)
all the best and take care
Congratulations on your win Liz.
I knew this was a winner when I read it.