Lovers Embrace

by deeplydesturbed   Aug 29, 2016

Entering the home
to smells of honeycomb
Hands begin to roam
He's in the zone.

Tender lips
Curvy hips
Heartbeats skip
Pants unzip.

Lovers embrace
On the staircase
It's a race
to third base.


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  • 1 year ago

    by Nicolette

    Nice and simple, enjoyed it, well done. :)

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    Naomi, this is a really good piece. I like the short, racy lines because they set the scene for hearts racing and how things would,be heading to third base lol. Takes me back ;)

    All the best, Em

  • 1 year ago

    by Brenda

    N, nicely done! Good rhyming, a story line that flows nicely. It's fun to think about those days when you end up dashing up the stairs or the couch, or many other places.....

    • 1 year ago

      by deeplydesturbed

      Agree! Just days when ya know what ya want and go for it..

  • 1 year ago

    by Ben Pickard

    I think I know what third base is and - as a youngster - I was always fairly happy with the idea of dashing for second. However, if third was achieved, all well and good...


  • 1 year ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    ...okay, but apart from that I was spot on!! Lol