by deeplydesturbed   Sep 21, 2018

Vacation time has come
Eating my way through
Going from place to place
And spending time with you..
Shots are not a good idea!!

possibly doesnt make sense - but i am enjoying my time away.


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  • 5 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    Hope you had a wonderful time xx

  • 5 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    I thought that was a nice, little read. Sometimes a piece needs to be short and sweet, so thank you for not pushing it past it's means.

    I love the last in itself. It turned a sweet poem into a poem with some humorous. Also, it creates more character for the reader to enjoy, because people are aware of the repercussions of lots of shots and wild nights.

  • 5 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    FYI, shots were a great idea ;)

  • 5 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    Vacations are always fun! I'm jealous, by the way. I've always wanted to go to Vegas!

    This simplistic poem explains the pleasures of vacation... eating all the good food, hitting all the attractions and the best part, enjoying it with someone special. The ending is funny, as I agree, too many shots are not a good idea. However, do enjoy yourself! ;)

  • 5 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    It's Vegas baby lol.

    Although I've never been but i so want to.

    Love this


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