Let Me See You and I'll Grant You a Wish [English Sonnet]

by Everlasting   Dec 6, 2016

If I were shooting stars traversing skies,
it'll be because I am in search of you.
Do know a while ago I saw your eyes
since then the flame of life in me just grew.
It's 'cause of then that I became a star:
a source of light that lives in solitude,
too distant from the world, away too far;
escorted by the darkness' servitude.
But lately parts of me are breaking up,
It has been since the day you disappeared
I'm falling fast, it's hard just holding up
by knowing I won't ever see you dear
So make the time to sit outside at night,
So I can see you once at least tonight.

Written by: L.L.


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  • 1 year ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    I often wish upon them/you...

  • 1 year ago

    by Brenda

    Luce, what a bittersweet write. A lovely sonnet with so much longing. I love how you used stars and being able to see your loved one if they just come out at night and look up-

  • 1 year ago

    by Meena Krish

    You are becoming very good with these Sonnets and each one of them don't just read but they have emotions weaved with rhymes. It attracts the reader to keep reading...nicely penned dear~

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    You're getting quite the dab hand at these luce, very good.