Hellon, so it was you!

by Everlasting   Jan 9, 2017


Hellon, so it was you
You who invented this form
Form that I attempted once,
Once only, but I faced a storm.

A storm of ramble words
Words with no sense at all
All because of a windy flow
Flow so fast so slow, it made it fall.

It fall to a rocky ground
Ground as white as a black sky
Sky that was filled with dark ink
Ink that was so dry

So dry the letters became brittle
Brittle so brittle unreadable
Unreadable to any reader
Reader who saw the unseeable

The unseeable became my poem
Poem that was hit by a storm
Storm that made my canvas dark
Dark as the ink, I have to inform.

Written back in 2013 as an attempt to written loop poetry. Lol
I was looking at this thread and that's how I found it. Thanks to Lonely soul for copying and pasting it there.

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/discussion/topic.html?topic_id=142628

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  • 7 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Hey Luce,

    I like this form it's like the blitz form, and the wordings never seem to be off key. I really enjoyed reading this... and it's about Hellon, a good dedication for her. ... I admit I'm envious about this. ..hahaha. .

    Well done to this wonderful piece. ..

    Gel

  • 7 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Nice job, Luce. You do tend to like complexity. This is a great tribute to Hellon's most recent win. Like hers, another good poem.