Once My Heart Beating Failed

by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist   Mar 12, 2017

How can I force, how can I wake
This dead and defeated emotion?

How can I try, how can I fake
This vanishing devotion?

I want it to revive
My love hope and desire,

But it can't, it really can't
In my heart, there's a dent.

Even though how hard I've tried
My heart's still numb,

I can say there's nothing left behind
With this love that I found.

Once my heart's beating failed
It will insist on loving you,

But it will never be the same
Even how sweet you call my name

Why does it hurt me so?
I don't know if there's nothing left you know,

The love you've once ignored
I think it's already dissolved.

I don't know if this silent feeling
Will still be waiting

For the day you call me babe
Let's see, let's breathe

Let's try,
And don't ask why.



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  • 8 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Wow, this is beautiful, Gel! I like it very much.

  • 11 months ago

    by Brenda

    Awww, Gel, this is just lovely! I have missed your work, glad you are back! Hugs-

    • 11 months ago

      by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

      Hey Brenda,
      I'm glad to know you missed my work. ...missed all your work too. ... gonna read some before goin to bed

  • 11 months ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Gel i agree with everyone else.. they always beat me to summing up peoples new pieces.. stop it guys! :P

    well done :) i enjoyed this sad piece..

    • 11 months ago

      by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

      Hey Naomi,
      I missed you... never mind the guys lol... I want the old layout of the website back ...I missed the pink colour.. lol, by the way, thank you for the comment.

    • 11 months ago

      by deeplydesturbed

      I miss you too Gel!!!

  • 11 months ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Totally agree with Ben and Em (haha I'm a poet and don't know it!) the rhymes were spot on and your imagery and the overall format of this is great, defo one of my favourite writes from you!

    The other Ben

    • 11 months ago

      by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

      Oh, thank you so much, Ben II... words coming from you all make me wanna write again.

  • 1 year ago

    by Ben Pickard

    As sad as this piece is, the rhythm and rhyme really are quite superb here.
    Technically, this is some of your best work in my opinion.

    All the best as ever,

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