Comments : In Once Green Fields

  • 3 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    This piece says a lot cassie - could be the world's physical destruction itself or worsening of human nature...whichever of these...we have surely lost the green unblemished beauty of who we are.

  • 3 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    It's important to raise awareness of the destruction of our world and what better way than through poetry. Most enjoyable read

  • 3 months ago

    by Brenda

    Cassie, I wish we would always remember that damage we do to each other and to our world, but alas we humans are destined to repeat our mistakes again and again-well done with this, maybe we will take heed this time-

  • 3 months ago

    by Lucifer

    It does not matter how many poems we write or how much awareness we raise, but it's only on the brink of destruction that people find the will to change.

    There are only a handful of planets in the cosmos that are capable of supporting complex life. This one can't be allowed to perish.

    Actually, this poem reminded me of one of my favorite movie 'the day earth stood still'.

  • 3 months ago

    by Lucifer

    Congratulations Cassie!

  • 3 months ago

    by Brenda

    Congratulations Cassie! Well deserved win for a very well thought out write.

  • 3 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    I'm so glad to see this on the front page, Cassie - it's wonderful.

  • 3 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Hi, Cassie. Congratulations on the win!

  • 3 months ago

    by Meena Krish

    Simple are the words yet they carry a deep message for
    those to step back and think...but none are doing that..
    So well penned, Congrats on the Win!

  • 3 months ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Congrats!

  • 3 months ago

    by Kireasha L

    A well deserved win. Congrats Cassie!

  • 3 months ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    A well deserved win.

  • 3 months ago

    by Courtney Hough

    i LOVE this. I cannot begin to describe how much i agree with this poem. It's not that we can't change. It's that the human race doesn't want to. This is beautifully written