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by CJ Maleney Oct 25, 2017
Nature, environment /
I am a little rivulet
I am not yet thought of as a stream
I bubble over stone and rocks
Down hills I pick up speed
My area increases now
As others join my flow
I will rest in ponds and lakes
But there is so much further still to go
I am now the mighty river
I no longer flow over land
I carve my path into it
I hydrate both beast and man
My journey is now over
I have become all that I can be
I started out as trickle
I AM NOW THE ROARING SEA
Really like this one!
by Milly Hayward
Loved this and the way the little droplet grows slowly as it journeys into the sea. Very clever and captivating piece. Milly x
by CJ Maleney
Glad you enjoyed, quite a simple little poem really
I love this too, Craig. Life's a journey, along the way we grow into better versions of our selves...or we make something out of the very tiny bits of what we have. Being the sea now I guess you mean to say you are now an overcomer. :-)
Thank you Mel. This one isn't really about me.
It's about people, and how as a collective they become way stronger and more powerful than they ever would be as an individual.
Craig - wonderful, wonderful *claps*
This is amazing and full of metaphores yet also very cute ...
Love it! Well done.
by stormingdance (Jessica)
Lovely, clever, effervescent write! Love love this poem!
I've not seen your profile before but when time allows I'll have a read of your stuff
by Ben Pickard