Bitter (Acrostic)

by stormingdance (Lessa)   Oct 25, 2017


Buried my past with my bones
I raise my glass; I'm not a quitter
Tired of trying to atone
The things I cannot change
Empty my heart upon the tomb
Reborn from the ashes of my blood

    report violation
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  • 6 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    I love the clever little rhyme between'quitter' and the title; rather quirky, I felt.

    Take care, Jessica,

    Ben

  • 6 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Very strong write, Jessica. Lovely acrostic.

  • 6 years ago

    by Risqué

    Very powerful write. Bitterness is such a strong emotion and I love your verse ‘I raise my glass; I’m not a quitter’... bitterness is often the unwillingness to let go of pride

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