The story here is not so personal that we wear your shoes, but it is well enough written in its vagueness that so many people can relate to it in their own way. I love your voice in this piece, however, I must say the flow was a little choppy - maybe because you got so carried away with the message?
Thank you for taking the time out to comment on my poem. I glad you liked it. As far as the choppyness is concerned. With certain poems I'm more focused on it but with this one, I just had a heavy heart and was an emotional state. So I just wrote down what came to me in its rawest form. Thank you again ;)