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by Carmen Feb 22, 2005
Friendship, family /
I thought I could trust you,
But now I know that's not true.
I thought you were my friend,
My heart you can no longer mend.
I told you my secrets,
But now I just have regrets.
I told you I can't take it,
Your lies are making me sick.
I kept it all inside,
But I can no longer hide.
I used to give in to your threats,
My hope no longer met.
How could you do this?
I ask, as I kiss
Our friendship goodbye.
All I can do now is sigh.
I sit and remember,
Our friendship so tender,
I never thought it could be ruined by anything,
But it ended up just like a summer fling.
Here I will send,
My farewells, so, my friend,
Goodbye, and this I must,
Tell you that you destroyed my trust.
Nice poem, though some of the rhyming sounds forced. Keep it up
Great poem and i relate to it too, well done, 5/5 =)
I liked this but i think every single rhyme was completly forced, but other then the flow being a little weird i think this was a good poem imma give it a 4/5 but i love the way you write about things you really feel keep it up
by Lost & Delirious
Really nice poem, I'm sorry if that happened to you.
by x Saiya
Another great poem. I give it 5/5. I can relate, too, in a a way. Keep up your great work!