Comments : Foreplay:Third Edition

  • 12 years ago

    by Fireflower

    lol AWESOME! i loved them all! ur a great writer, and i loved the endings! u must keep writing! you're an awesome writer!

    vedali

  • 12 years ago

    by WishingOnAStar

    it was good..keep writing
    3/5

  • 12 years ago

    by ♥CRIMSONxX♥

    lol 5/5, i enjoyed it, but not THAT much ;) keep it up ;) xxx

  • 12 years ago

    by shannon

    another realy really good poem..keep it up.your good..5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Amit

    Nicely written, very well done.

    5/5, Take Care, Always Believe in Love,

    Nidhi's Love, Amit.

  • 12 years ago

    by Airika

    that ways areally great ending to you series of poems you should do it again some time

  • 12 years ago

    by Nanita

    THAT WAS ANOTHER ONE OF YOUR GREATEST AND I WISH IT WOULDNT HAVE BEEN OVER SO SOON....KEEP WRITIN TAKE CARE. *hugs*

    *plz comment or rate mine thanx...*

  • 12 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Wow I wasn't expecting a one night stand great job! Thanx for pointing out part 3 I must be blind to not see it! Take Care~! Brooke

  • Wow thats really really good, keep writing. they were all incredible!!!

    Jemma

  • 12 years ago

    by Laura

    crazy crazy
    but are u sure u wanna stop u got alot of people into it haha

  • 12 years ago

    by Amy Jo

    lol bluntly put i'd say ur quite a jerk, b/c who knows if you'd want something like that again and not just a one night stand. lol.. really good 6/5 for all three foreplays

  • 12 years ago

    by Kristy Hall

    hey, thats was awesome...loved your poem you were right i did like it!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by *YaSmIn*

    lol nicely done matt....good job in keepin us all drooling for MORE....def. deservers a *6/5* lol........oh and thanks for the moment.... ;) lol..........
    ~*~yasmin~*~

  • 12 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Great ending to the series! I loved it! The passion, the heat...awesome stuff~Holly

  • 12 years ago

    by Seductive

    damn u ard wit me, i realy enjoyed that***************

  • 12 years ago

    by Jennah Lacey

    wow again i bow down to the master!!! your really good....dont leave us hanging wanting more for to long ....write more please you have a gift keep it up

    Jennahlacey

  • 12 years ago

    by creasy

    great series. i loved it all. damn one night stands..lmao...great job writing though. you should write more like this. take care. :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Hard2Heal

    Lol i like!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Hard2Heal

    Lol i like!! great poems. your an amazing writer

  • 12 years ago

    by just a poet

    Grea to no that so many men like u r players if this poem is true. i have decided that i dont like u