Because Of You.....

by Daniel   May 11, 2005

Because Of You…..

Because of you I couldn’t get Into Heaven.
I came back crying and was torn apart.
It was dark and the time was eleven.
That’s when I noticed my little black heart.

It began to crumble and I tried so hard,
To grab the pieces before they struck the ground.
My hand was bleeding from grasping a shard,
I wanted so bad to have you around.

You left me for dead without a good-bye,
Tears filled the street and carried me away.
Flowing I asked myself constantly why?
Someone could be this way.

While I lay here In absolute distress,
You smile and party and feel so free.
You don’t talk and I thought you were the best,
You told me you’d still be friends with me.

I’m going, going gone,
Without a heart you cannot be free.
I never thought love could be wrong,
Yet here I am alone and floating out to sea.


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  • 11 years ago

    by Beauty In The Breaking

    O.O wow 5/5
    This was SO great! I could actually feel the pain and loneliness like I was going through it O.O I love poems that I can actually feel while reading to the words =)
    Great work ^.^

  • 11 years ago

    by silence

    This is the first poem I've read from you but all I can say is 'wow'. I love your style of writing. You deffinatly have alot of talent and apparently alot of emotion as well. Please keep writing :) 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by dandy

    Daniel, this is an awesome poem! I know I say this a lot, but the imagery is just so great! Thanks for commenting on my poem. Keep writing and best of luck if this poem was based on a real situation. Love is never easy.....


  • this is sad... but a good poem.