The Two Sunrises

by lisa marie   May 23, 2005


When the sailing clouds finally break
You're what i find and what i conceal
And when the sun quietly awakes
You're the wholeness that i feel

Through the eyes of the unheard face,
The look in the unfamiliar voice.
And only you in my constant embrace
Because you're my world and my only choice

So when the moon starts to sing.
Wash my love in this natrual spring.
Because tonight the stars are dancing around.
And my pretty face and lies can be confound.

Listen to the voices drifting in the wind
And purify us and all we've sinned
Admire the rainbows graceful life
That will beautify our endless strife.

Because today we'll grow on a tree
And live forever in our own lasting love
Cause the water in the sky pours in the sea
Holding us together with heaven above

If you could only see what's under the ground
You'd find my happiness and all of my disguises
So take this shovel and dig all around
Until you reach my love in the two sunrises.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Truly in Love

    Wonderful ending.... the combination of love and the environ. always works well.. great work

    Hoping the best for you

    Love,
    Ipsita

  • 18 years ago

    by lisa marie

    the rhyme scheme was changed on purpose...

    it goes..

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    thought it'd be more exciting.

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie84

    You painted a picture in my mind and you kept me interested throughout. I love the imagery in it....

    The only thing I saw that was a down fall is you changed up the rhyming scheme a bit. It didn't hurt the poem it just threw the flow off a bit.

    Hope all is well....very nice write!! :)

  • 18 years ago

    by ~*Ley*~

    this was really sweet. i enjoyed reading it. keep up the good work
    ~Freak~

  • 18 years ago

    by midnight♥lullibys

    aw its so beautiful! love is a....uh...lovely...thing....u did an excellent job on the rhyming nd it flowed so nicely i loved every line!! great job 5/5!!

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