Something has happed to you, dear friend,
You use to be yourself and now you pretend
To be someone elseâ€¦ someone untrue
I wish you would tell meâ€¦whereâ€™s the real you?
You broke my trust when you tore apart
All that tied us at the startâ€¦
Someone you use to hate is now your closest friend
I thought you could see through her mask of pretendâ€¦
She is to blame for sheâ€™s the one that took away
All of your inner beautyâ€¦ and you thought it was okâ€¦
So now youâ€™ve built this other you, a monster
That keeps on breeding hate faster and fasterâ€¦
Why have you done this? Canâ€™t you see?
The way things are, is not how their meant to be.
You pushed me away, so thereâ€™s nothing I can do
To help reveal whatâ€™s left of youâ€¦
Look in the mirror and try to see
If this is the way you want to beâ€¦
Outside so beautiful, inside so dark,
An evil girl that has no heartâ€¦
A so-called rebel that knows nothing of
True freedom or how itâ€™s like to love.
Clothes with prints that â€œscreamâ€ with pain,
All done for attention, but all in vain.
You donâ€™t realize that youâ€™re not the only one
To hurt, to cry, to feel undone,
Yet you donâ€™t seem to get out your selfish hate,
Maybe youâ€™ll realize it when itâ€™s too lateâ€¦
But until then you choose the wrong path,
You cut, you bleed and you forgot to laugh,
Your beauty now, is darkened by the sorrow you feel
When you see your new mask starting to peelâ€¦
It hurts to see how she plays you so cleaver
She changed you for now and maybe foreverâ€¦
I hope someday youâ€™ll see that the way you are now is just not right
And try to change back to how you were and not give up without a fightâ€¦
Jolly good work my dear. I liked it very well. The story it tells is so often the story of many torn apart friendships. I am sorry that if it happened between you and a good friend. A terrible thing to have happen. Now back to the poem, all and all I give it a 5. Keep writting my dear. Let your mind wonder and never fear to write it down on a piece of paper and share it. Beauty is also made by ones poetic words. Cheers!