To My Daddy

by =)~ BJ ~(=   Jun 6, 2005


Right now I'm small and don't quite
know.
But oneday soon
I'll be big enough to miss you too.
For now tho you're in a far away
place fighting for me.
Being brave and courageous so I
can be free of fear.
Till you come back home to me
Know that I LOVE YOU!
And if I have to wait to see you in
Heaven
I'll know you'll always be safe and
be there
Waiting for me when I come home
to you.
One way or another we'll be
together forever.

I know they arent great, but it still puts out the feelings tho. may not rhyme but who said a poem had to, to get the message across.
thank you for readin my poems
Belinda Jones

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  • 12 years ago

    by Ashli

    nice feeling, but i have to agree with enslavement on this one...it does need a little work on the flow, but otherwise, good job!

  • 12 years ago

    by Andrea

    this was good...i think it needs more rhyming tho

  • 12 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    I thought this was excellent, as long as it is your feelings it is a masterpiece in my eyes. xxx

  • 12 years ago

    by Lecrissa

    this was good too. I liked it a lot...

  • 12 years ago

    by Hopeless Romantic

    I LOVE IT!!! i want a baby :( im gonna adopt or something to get me one! :D i love ur work BJ. mwah. xxxx keep it up now onto ur last one. :D