Comments : Speeding

  • 12 years ago

    by ♥Leah♥

    omg-if ur talking about meth i know what ur talking about 4real! That stuff has had me for a little over year. but i've been clean 7 days today! Longest time ever except in rehab but i couldn't have gotten it if i wanted it there. im trying to shake the habit tho. if i don't it'll kill me.
    This was a really good peom. it was so simple yet it had so much meaning. i liked it alot.Keep it up! ***Leah

  • 12 years ago

    by Jenn

    hey leah is right it is very simple but had alot of meaning good job 5/5 keep it up!

  • 12 years ago

    by Holz

    Great poem esther, a small poem with a big meaning. its great 5/5!

  • 11 years ago

    by lauracampbell

    Verri nice.

  • 11 years ago

    by PS

    I really like:
    "Kill the speed,
    You do not need"
    and
    "The grave you dig,
    Will not forgive"
    they are awesome lines.

  • 11 years ago

    by Kacey Lynne

    First off your poem was great and that really means allot cause i know of someone who lost their kid because os sdeedin. and second thanks for the comment please keep reading my poems your comment means allot to me.

  • 11 years ago

    by PS

    Um its ok. there isnt a lot of depth..but i really liked this:
    To dig a grave,
    You could have saved

  • 11 years ago

    by metuka

    It's a short poem, but it has some power.. the meaning of it.. I liked it.. Nice job.. keep it up :))))

  • 11 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Yea speed is bad! i love the use of words you put there the flow was great!

  • 11 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    It was really good, i liked the message behind it, it was strong and to the point. keep it up.

  • 11 years ago

    by Taylor Lyn

    Excellent metaphoric poem that can be viewed many different ways, I really like it.

  • 11 years ago

    by AllHailTheHeartbreaker

    Nicely written and interesting concept.

  • 11 years ago

    by Kayla

    Ooh i really really like this one a lot.i like the symbols that used with the grave and such..lol very nice. keep it up.

  • 10 years ago

    by Lenny

    What a strong message. Dont speed! *speeds* Again I find it amusing! Are all your poems this amusing? I guess Id have to read them all to find that out. The line 'Dont kill the speed' confused me a little and put a stutter in my rythym so perhaps you could re-arrange that. Otherwise what a nice little poem!

  • 10 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    Excellent. Short, punchy and to the point. I loved everything about this poem - your word choice was exemplary. I could not agree more with the message. Well done. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I liked this, I thought it was full of meaning yet straight to the point.

  • 10 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Hmm. it's not quite as good as your other one. But I like how it circulates, I don't think thats the right word, but I'm sure you get my point. You've great rhyming abilities. You seem to rhyme without killing your poem, unlike me.

  • 10 years ago

    by Narphangu

    I like the idea, and you have some pretty freaking awesome phrases in there, so good job!

    My suggestion, should you choose to want one ;) , would be this:

    Try adding a little bit more description, cause it's a bit hard to follow.

  • 8 years ago

    by NiQk

    Spectacular poem! one of my favoerites! You are definately becoming a favorite! :D