Comments : R.I.P. To Me

  • 13 years ago

    by Melissa Westfall

    It was a very sad poem but it was awsome. i cried like a baby. i know ive said it so many times but i really hate to see you go. you are such a wounderful and talented girl. i hope to see some more poems before that day. let it all out it might help some of the pain go away. i really hope you dont go through with this but i love you and will always remeber you if you do..........lots of love and huggs for you......missy

  • 13 years ago

    by Dawn Manna

    Wow that was so sad. very emotional. please dont do it. im here if you need to talk
    dawn

  • Hey huni,
    listen i no everything may seem really bad right now, trust me, i no the feeling! but you have 2 put up with the rain if u want a rainbow! life is hard but sometimes u have to put up with everything that life does to learn how 2 pick ourselves back up.....life is like a scribble it goes one way then turns and goes sharply the other, no one wants you to die, i'm always here 4 u 2 talk to! life is hard for everyone, everyone has troubles in their lives but they find ways to overcome them and trust me, suicide is not the answer, my cousin committed suicide and even tho he thought no one cared everyone did and he was loved by so many people! please u have a whole life ahead of you, don't end it, you can do so much with your life! please stay strong and take care! your a great writer, i love your work, keep writing, it helps!
    love always! maddison xxxx

  • 13 years ago

    by ~~Fire Angel~~

    I know exactly how u feel, as i was reading this i saw me doing what the poem said and unfortunately i have done it many times before. i know its hard to see people say "light at the end of the tunnel" im not sure how that goes, but there is a chance of feeling better. and besides i think that if u are set on sept 23 then u wouldnt have written it in the poem. i have done such things before.
    then again i may be wrong... im not sure because i dont know you. so my question is this do i need to find you and sit with you the whole day on the 23rd? ill do it i dont want you to give in to suicide you have so much talent!

  • 13 years ago

    by Natalie84

    I think you have some serious thinking to do...thinking about life. Life is hard but you have to push through...there's nothing so horrible that there's reason to take your own life...NOTHING! Live forward to the rest of your years and you'll look back on this and thank God you're still here.... Excellent write...Take care and keep your head up...

  • 13 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This is a very well written dark poem in the American language so to speak

  • 13 years ago

    by Hayley

    Hey, please don’t go, I know life sucks so much, I mean it does, but you gotta believe that all this sHit goes away and it gets better. I mean hold on for jus something find sumthin to live for and live. Get help, something help yourself, write cry, but throw the blades away, its hard but you cant rely on a knife to help you when your angry or sad. It hurts other people not jus yourself, if you need someone to talk to I don’t know when I’ll be online to check my email, but you can try anytime and I really hope you dnt go thru wit suicide. I mean I was sad and depressed to but I found something to live for and its me. I wanna help kids like me somday and I wont help them if I’m dead. That’s why I live. So hell if I can find a way to live,I know you can, I’ll help you if you want. But don’t kill yourself. Hugs-hayley

  • 13 years ago

    by Lost & Delirious

    It's really well written and sad, but please don't do it. HoLd On!!!!

  • 13 years ago

    by DarkxBlood

    Your hands
    are so sweaty and cold
    just like ur broken heart
    i know that its so hard to grasp
    that thread of life
    and hold on
    but hold on a little bit longer
    dont let go of the grass.
    heaven is such a beautiful place
    a place you crave so much
    but first things first
    dont end too soon
    cause hell is so much worse.

  • 13 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    Hey sweety...This poem is so sad and very deep!!! I honestly don't want you to go, I wish that I could take your pain away, just remember that I'm with you in spirit!!! I'm so sorry for your loss, but they would want you to live and be strong for them!!! It's not like I don't know your pain, I really do....I feel like dying too all the time, we just have to be strong, right?? Please talk to me, I'll be your shoulder to cry on, I'll listen!!
    Things will get better, I promise....Take my hand, I'm reaching out for you, I'll help you through this...

    Much love Sabrina

  • 13 years ago

    by JJ

    I love Brodie's comment "why waste a great brain like yours?" you have some amazing talent and I wish you would get some help.

  • 13 years ago

    by Always Smiling

    Omg this was soo good but soo sad... please please dont do it. i know that all these ppl saying it means nothing since none of us know u... but u have t understand that things will always get better hun... trust me i used to be alot like u.... please please please dont
    luv always smiling oxoxxo
    p.s. im here to talk ill be a friend when u need one

  • 13 years ago

    by Kirsty

    I think that it takes guts to write such a personal poem about yourself and share it on here...maybe u feel bad now but nothing lasts forever...just like your cuts u WILL heal...look at each comment on here...they are all for you if you can draw people in to care through a poem then what else can you do? you have some excellent talent and i feel privaliged to have read it you should share your thoughts and feelings to as many people as you can...by writing for others your providing a escape route for them to forget about what is going on in their lives and think of yours...dont waste such a poetic mind like yours...express it...everyone is here for you...im here for you...keep your chin high!! love you kirsty xxxxx

  • 13 years ago

    by Jamie

    Never will she stop to think
    Of all the people she will miss
    You can call it 'ignorance'
    But ignorance is bliss

    that was a beautiful stanza it truly was

    You may ask now who
    This f u c k ed up girl can be...
    I thought it would be obvious
    This girl is the f u c k ed up ME

    that stanza is overused and didnt fit to be the end of this poem....you already stated at the beggining of the poem that it was about you so this line lost ALL power which it didn't have in the first place, it didnt do it for me a great poem like this deserves a great ending maybe try again i dunno

  • 13 years ago

    by Kathrynn

    Hey,
    you don't know me, but please don't do it.. it's not worth it. i have tried to commit suicide a number of times, and it's actually not as easy as you'd think it is. and trying, but not succeeding, is one of the worst things you can do. honestly.
    you are an amazing writer, and i'm sure, an awesome girl. and, even though i don't know you, i love you, i love your writing, and i would be so sad to see you go....
    please don't do it- you CAN hold on, even when it feels like there's nothing left

    anyway, awesome poem, it was beautiful, in a sad, depressing way..

    please rethink your decision
    pm me if you need or want to talk

    love,
    kathrynn

    ps- why sept. 13th??

  • 13 years ago

    by I.Dont.Own.Emotion.I.RENT.

    Omg plez dont do this. plez dont kill yourself. right now ur poems are keeping me going. i'm seriously crying right now. i just had a terrible week. plez plez stay. u no i'm always here for you. everyone is and we want to help. i cant take anymore bad stuff plez dont do this. my ex bf who right now is kinda friends with me but he likes to make my life bad just found out i cut. no one knows not even my best friends and he saw. i was freaking out cuz i dont want anyone to know. and i just dont no wut to do anymore. if he tells i'm done for. but plez plez stay dont do this. i'm always here for you. PM me if you wanna talk love you! ~lex

  • 13 years ago

    by XnotaprettygirlX

    I love ya hunni..so does GOD, He will be the one you face..and suicide only leads to hell...im sorry. that you feel this way..i too feel the same now..im sry hunni plz stay strong we love you
    plz dnt go

    -angel-

  • 13 years ago

    by LKA

    Hay im going thru the same thing right now,
    I want to end it right now,
    if you need to talk please add me
    im here for you
    luv always xox

  • 13 years ago

    by Piper

    Hey, i was just wondering if you are planning to kill yourself because it sounds like you are. I'm not judging you or anything because i'm like that as well. My email address is Dark_Fever88@hotmail.com, if you want to talk.

  • 13 years ago

    by Liz

    Im soo sooo sooo sorry all that had to happen to you, i know how you feel... and by looking at all your comments... your NOT alone!! everyone has to go though crap, but just know... we all care about ya and we dont wanna see your talented so die!!!! stay with us we'll help ya thu!!!! WE LUV YA GIRL
    -liz-