LONELY

by midnight♥lullibys   Sep 17, 2005


Trying to reach out
to grasp someones hand
trying to shout
for the silence you cannot stand

where are those friends
when its dark and full of gloom
when you believe this is where it ends
at your inevitable doom

how can they really care
they only love you now and then
of course you wouldn't dare
to let this "friendship" end

they are all you have
to get you through the night
never again to smile or laugh
because who could love you, right?

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  • 18 years ago

    by martha shaw

    Nice flow

  • 18 years ago

    by BrokenMisery

    This poem really spoke to me because I've been at that point in my life for quite a while. Nice work, I like the ideas, continue to explore them and try for some more descriptive line. Great job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Justin

    I think you did a good job, i know how that feels, its a terrible feeling.. my mom keeps me in a cage that i call home all the time, and i have no one to talk to or hang out with, so its very lonely, and i have to stay in a very small room, all by myself because my brother gets me introuble, this poem was really true, i can relate to it alot, good job, 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by shawn hoskins

    Very good nice flow to it you are very good.5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Drew Gold

    This so accurately depicts the feeligns of loneliness, longing, etc.. meter and flow was great...i realy dont have much critique, regretfully.. but i did really like this.. keep writing for sure.. im not homeright now, but id be glad to read more once i get home.. pZ out =O)

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