Wow, this is an amazing poem! you are definatly on my favorites list, you have such amazing writing talent and i really appreciate your work! 5/5 nice work. voting and commenting on my poems is very much appreciated. ~Hard2Heal
You are a wonderfull writer laura...you really do have talent...no one never really knows what there good at at a young age...but i think you have found what your good at...keep up the great writing..your deff on my favorite's!!!!! xoxo nelle
Wow this poem was quite simply amazing. I really enjoyed it. You really held the readers attention as they read on. I really liked the way you ended it,
"All is quiet, but you still hear,
That same perfect song,
Now everyone will let you down,
But the lullaby plays on."
I just thought this concluded the poem brilliantly. The flow was great and the hryme pattern worked and didnt seem forced. The vocabulary was great, it created nice imagery. A very enjoyablke read, thank you for your comments! xx