Comments : Lullaby

  • 12 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    Wonderful work I really love this one

  • 12 years ago

    by Hard2Heal

    Wow, this is an amazing poem! you are definatly on my favorites list, you have such amazing writing talent and i really appreciate your work! 5/5 nice work. voting and commenting on my poems is very much appreciated. ~Hard2Heal

  • 12 years ago

    by Prophecies In Kodak

    Wow..this was excellent. Definatly a 5/5. Grr..I wish I could say more but i find it complicated. Heh..you've got some talent though.

  • 11 years ago

    by Christine

    AWESOME poem!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by PonderBoy

    Its so beautiful, i love it, thanks!

  • 11 years ago

    by Nelle

    You are a wonderfull writer laura...you really do have talent...no one never really knows what there good at at a young age...but i think you have found what your good at...keep up the great writing..your deff on my favorite's!!!!! xoxo nelle

  • 11 years ago

    by Heidi

    I love it, perfectly written. amazing.

    heidi

  • 11 years ago

    by White Blizzard

    This poem is just terrible, please stop using typical rhyming words. you are a pathetic poet.
    and you're very judgmental

  • 11 years ago

    by Jerrys¤baby¤girl

    Thats really good!!! it goes very well... Blizzard had no right to say anything bad about your poems... theyre great..
    Love Always Tiffany Heather

  • 11 years ago

    by limp

    Ewt8jnuqrjt
    i can't be an assistant now :|

  • 11 years ago

    by unprotected lover

    Omg I love your poems!!!!
    Didn't you use to have blonde hair, like a long time ago. cuz you are on my favorites list. and i thought it was you. But who knows. anyhow. great poems. love them all

  • 11 years ago

    by limp

    Laura you heap of sh!t. :] read it. read it NOW x

  • 11 years ago

    by Phantasmagoria

    So is this about a spacific song? anyway, keep up the work love.

  • 11 years ago

    by limp

    Ahaa 2damax! k?k. is blatantly good. :]x

  • 11 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    This was a very good poem. Ian told me to read your work, because it was very good. He told me to start off with this one and then Bang Bang. Um, I am yet to find that. Nicely done.

    -Jennifer.

    Overall Rating: 4.9/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    Wow, this is absolutely amazing. Incredible write, what more can I say. Keep it up!

  • 10 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Very well penned, good flow and imagery. Excellent job. Definetly a 5/5 from me. I loved it!

  • 10 years ago

    by limp

    I cnt c y u hv diz wun featurd cuz it ent dat gud but ye.

  • 10 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    Wow this poem was quite simply amazing. I really enjoyed it. You really held the readers attention as they read on. I really liked the way you ended it,

    "All is quiet, but you still hear,
    That same perfect song,
    Now everyone will let you down,
    But the lullaby plays on."

    I just thought this concluded the poem brilliantly. The flow was great and the hryme pattern worked and didnt seem forced. The vocabulary was great, it created nice imagery. A very enjoyablke read, thank you for your comments! xx

  • 10 years ago

    by AlaSkA

    Wow, this is good. i like the emotions here. well written too. your pjcture is very nice too. {:
    -Tom