BYe 2 U...HeLlO To HiM

by ღPrEciiOuz~KiiZeZღ   Nov 27, 2005


This isn't just a poem
this isn't just a thought
this is how hard
for you my heart has fought

you didn't appreciate me
you never showed me love
now that u are gone
i have found my angel from above

he's tall, dark, and handsome
something you were never
i am looking in his eyes
and praying 4 forever

forever as Ms. Espinoza
forever as his wife
forever a life
far away from that knife

all u did was hurt me
and i was your love slave
when u wanted...where ever we were
if u were in the mood i had to give

its like every time we made love
my heart was slowly breaking
with every breath i took
my soul you were taking

now you are far away from me
and i never want u back
you think I'll always be there
but thats where u start thinking whack

since you left i have been happy
my heart is slowly getting back together
i can't trust u anymore
it just can't be like before

u have showed me so much hurt
that nothing can make up for it
but my baby can try
and i promise that he'll never make me cry

making up for lost times
i can say good bye
without worrying that I'm slowly
going to die

good bye to the past
good bye to the memories
and most important good bye to us

hello to Miguel
hello to a new start
thanks 4 putting my heart together
and assuring that we won't part

i love you more than anything
which is why i want to b Ur wife
together be with u
and walk hand in hand with u in life

*this is dedicated to two people and my girls know who they are...well tell me what u think...i would appreciate it...i know i haven't written in a while which i hope this is good 4 a comeback...*

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  • 18 years ago

    by Becky

    Wow now this poem is intense, there is just sooo much intense emotion, its like a slap in the face lol , its shocking

    lots of love
    *~*Becky*~*

  • 18 years ago

    by yaRis

    Bello simplemente bello! me encanto deveras! im glad u liked my poem "If i gave You" n just as i told senorita RICAN C. i love to read ur comments u leave on my poems they mean alot to know what is on ppls mind but especially a few ppls minds like urs.... Keep it up mami and as i already told u congrats on finding true love again and i truly do it works for good cuidate... i si encuentrs un chico bueno echamelo pa'ca (donde mi) lol ciudate muah =) 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Ladida

    Wow! I've never read any of your stuff before but that was awesome! You are so talented. I'll have to read more. Keep writing! I'll be looking

  • 18 years ago

    by Rican Chemistry

    Girla this was great, awesome, DEE BOMB!!! lol I really love it ma. And I hope this is true. That you are finally happy. Girl this poem has heart. I dont even know what to say. You had me SMILING like crazy. I was like " Go Ahead Girl" you tight. Great comeback.....is Miguel ALL yours now? And I got your pics, did you get mine? Do you have pics of Miguel? Or was that Miguel? Girl I dont know....lol, and about my last poem, that was an old poem, I was just blowing off some steam back then. Long story cut short: My cousin wanted Rolando and started talkin shit and I talked shit right back and she didnt expect it....CAT FIGHT!!!!! lol Girl I loved it, keep it coming ... I check everyday if you wrote anything and I am really happy you finally did cus I was starving for your poetry...lol bye chula

    ::MELI::

  • 18 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    Wow!! Amazing poem hun!! I love the way you wrote this, because it shows that even if things get horrible that eventually you can find someone new and get back on track with your life... fantastic poem!! 5/5 You are definitely one of my favorites!

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