WhEn I'm weAk

by ღPrEciiOuz~KiiZeZღ   Dec 25, 2005


Nobody ever made me feel like this
you make me smile when i want to cry
you make me want to hold you close
when i really want to say good-bye

i feel so happy that i always think about you
when i fall asleep... about you i dream
you make me laugh
when what i want to do is scream

you changed my life for the better
your the one person i can't live without
instead of never trusting you
you leave me without a doubt

just seeing that smile makes my day
and i know you won't break my heart in any way
i know that instead of being with your friends
you choose to be with me the whole day

you thought me real love
and the feelings that we share are unique
when i want to give up
your there to be strong...when I'm weak

*this poem i want to dedicate to my baby...i love you more than anything*

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  • 18 years ago

    by pseudo

    Wow.. lots of love in this poem.. im sure your happy to be with him because it shows through in this poem =) i liked all the comparisons you made i especially liked
    "you make me laugh
    when what i want to do is scream"

    great job on this one =) very creative and strong words =)

    --emotionless19*

  • 18 years ago

    by cLumsy

    Your man should be grateful for having an angel like you write beautiful tear-jerking poems for him. ;D keep up that ever-glowing talent! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by melissa

    I love this poem.you have a special talent,keep up the great work.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jackie Marie

    Aww I am glad you have someone special to you who is like that. Great poem. I love it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Rican Chemistry

    Sweet and simple....I wish life was like this poem...lolz. I liked it alot nena. Keep up the good work....

    ::MELI::

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