Wild Flower

by Juls   Jan 4, 2006


Wilted roses
unstemmed daises
dead red lilies all lay in the pasture
they all seem to be kicked flowers

Baby breaths scattered
Pansies all a disaster
Black-eyed Susan's are now
Black-hearted misfortunes

Blue Phlox has erupted
Our love now disturbed
Our passion flower
is now a violent hail storm

Love has wilted
along with the flowers
We lay in the pastures
with no words spoken

It was time for love
to exit our bodies
For our paths in life
should be rechosen

For our love to weak
to move on any farther
We will live without each other
from this moment forward

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  • 18 years ago

    by Letty

    Excellent job Juls . This poem was deep . It held me captive through the entire poem . Another magnificent work of art . Keep up the good work Goddess . lol

    love ya
    Letty

  • 18 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    Once again very beautiful poem...hope to read the rest of yours.

  • 18 years ago

    by LostSoul

    Lol. sorry I took so long to comment back, I forgot. Anyways this is a great poem, it flows so well. This is my favorite part:
    It was time for love
    to exit our bodies
    For our paths in life
    should rechosen

  • 18 years ago

    by Brigitte

    This poem is Breath taking! I can really relate to it! 5/5!

  • 18 years ago

    by ¤Tabby¤

    This is a good poem....i give u a major 5/5 lol :)

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