Wow! this was...sweet, beautiful, awesome, touching...your gf is very very lucky to have sumone to write poetry for her i wish my bf would do that for me lol... all of your poems are totally awesome and all leave me speechless i dont really kno wut to say...keep it up and thnx for the comments and i have been working on a longer one...take care
I put another poem on my site thingy that I had to write for school, but I will try to write some more...I'm kinda new at this, & I can't just sit down & write when I feel like it. I'm going skiing with my youth group this weekend, so maybe I will somehow be "inspired". I don't know. But thanks for all the encouragement!
You gf is very lucky yo have someone like you! this poem shows how much you care about her how much you love her and don't want to lose her....I hope you stay this...forever:) great job and keep it up:) 5/5