Emotionally Weird

by Syn   Feb 18, 2006


When your future looks so bleak,
When she's made your heart so meek.
When that someone calls you a freak,
And true happiness is all you seek.

There is a place up in the sky,
Where you will get the ultimate high.
Even if you are "Emotionally weird",
And she's the source of your fear.

And she doesn't know,
That you're being emotionally raped.
By her and her circles,
Something you just can't take.

How could she do this you say,
"I goto church for goodness sake",
But good doesn't always happen to the good,
All things happen when they should,
Just be thankful in the end,
At least none of it was pretend.

-Syn

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  • 18 years ago

    by Minkus

    Very true; good things don't always happen to good people. 5/5.

  • 18 years ago

    by Emma

    Wow this is amazing i love it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Sondos

    A highly original topic once again and the words you use are so true. I find your way of righting fresh, interesting and creative Keep It Up
    All the Best
    Sondos

  • 18 years ago

    by Once an Angel

    This poem was real because it was like I was reading you talking or reading inside your mind. It was an insite into you as a person. The only thing I would say is that at the beginning the poem is rhyming but is was really forced and soon after you dropped the rhyming all together. I would recomend that you go back and change the rhyming part and add stronger words that will bring your meaning out instead of just rhyme. I am not trying to be offensive so please don't take in that way, because it is just some advice.

    -Tainted Mikochan

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    This poem was very good. very well written. 5/5

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