Perfection is a Diaster

by Juls   Mar 5, 2006


Her eyes are getting baggy
along with her clothes and skin
Her nails are becoming brittle
She thinks this is one big sin

Knowing she needs help
but to afriad to say a word
She always blows it off
with a few made up words

People are starting to notice
Starting to see her ribs
she hides them like she hides
the scars upon her wrists

She knows she can help herself
but many days that is hard
She cant help but think
Where in the world is God?

Food is her worst enermy
Perfection is what she seeks
Life as she knows
has a cost of being thin and weak

Water takes the place of soda
Lettuce takes the place of meat
When she looks in the mirror
She knows she is a mistake

She finally get so weak
She cant even stand up
So she lies in her bed
without a single sound

As she lies there a single tear
rolls
rolls
down

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  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    This poem is very touching. i dont even know what to say..this poem was just amazing.

  • 18 years ago

    by azlan26

    I love the ending, didn't flow too well in some parts, but it didn't make much difference, I still love it =]
    Keep it up!!

  • 18 years ago

    by LuvMeAlwayz

    *sniff**sniff* i'm near tears, it's such a great poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by Sole

    An excellent ending though the spelling is sometimes a little shaky (Who am I to talk! )

    Lettece = Lettuce

    And you have written an where it should perhaps be and.

    Hope this helps

    Peace.

  • 18 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Hubbster,

    Damn both you and Ian, IM SOBBING! I love you to bits, and I'll be here for you every step of the way. Both Ian and I will be. Your stuck with us =) *hugs*

    No matter what