Drip-Drop

by Jessica   Mar 16, 2006


Drip-Drop, Drip-Drop,
The rain goes
As it tumbles down
It glistens gaily from the grass
And glows on the petals of flowers
Drip-Drop, Drip-Drop,
The rain swooshes silently
As it slides over shiny leaves
Drip-Drop, Drip-Drop,
The rain runs down
The rugged hills,
And rough rocks
Drip-Drop, Drip-Drop,
The rain fades away,
And leaves the watery magic
Behind

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  • 17 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    Very nice poem, filled with great descriptions and repitition.

  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    Yeah, I would rather have rain than snow at times. Only because rain = warm. Lol

  • 17 years ago

    by Lovely Bones

    I love the imagery behind this. I love the repitition.. I could smell, feel and hear the rain as I read it. That is truly amazing talent =)

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie

    Aww this was pretty, I love your poems so much. There all soo good =P tehe

    I loved in this one how you kept repeating Drip Drop. Sounded cool, Lol.
    Awesome job again.
    And yessss, I'm running out of poems taha.

    `taleeee xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Bridgette

    That was really good.. you really have a way with words. I love the way that you described everything and the flow and rhythm of this was really good. You did a great job on this!