Slipping silently into the sea of her dreams,
shaking in fear as nightmares engulf her.
Tingles speed up her spine, her fear
possesses, stresses, messes with her mind.
as if her terror had been timed,
the timer had finally gone off.
I like this a lot. It is intense and truly greatly written. You created powerful atmosphere within every line. The portrayed emotions are overwhelming. You managed to say so much within such short piece and that is truly impressing.
-Tingles speed up her spine, her fear
possesses, stresses, messes with her mind.-
Very effective and somehow haunting...