Comments : Reflection

  • Awww i l0ved this poem!! i can toTally relate 2 what ur feeling, remember you may n0t b able 2 helo urself but talking 2 someone might help, nd u can always talk 2 me!! 5/5 luv maddison xxx

  • 11 years ago

    by Polly

    Wow this is awesome! It's really sad and deep, and written in a really powerful way. Take care I hope you are okay, if you ever need to talk just let me know.
    - Polly

  • 11 years ago

    by sarah

    This poem is fantastic, such an emotional piece, def got my 5 vote keep writing and take care of yourself hun sarah x

  • 11 years ago

    by Trampled Angel

    Holy crap, this poem was really good. I haven't read anything by you in a while love, but your still have the strong poetic voice I have come to love so strongly. Your style in this poem added to the impact of the poem, by talking about the girl that ended up being you. I was impressed and though the poem was long that didn't take away from how much a loved it.

    I want to give you a hug hunni and let you cry in my arms.
    I'll let you confess to another person about your addictions and self harm.
    I won't judge you, because I have already walked the lonely road.
    If you will give me a chance to assist you, I will try to lighten your load.

    Nothing amazing, but just remember I love you! Best of luck sweetheart.

    -Tainted Mikochan

  • 11 years ago

    by ~*Beautifully Broken*~

    Geat poem very sad but i can totally relate havent seen a poem from you for a long time but glad to see one 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by The Simpsons rule

    I think your poems are great!!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by ScarletHaze

    Wow hun amazing are you ok? i'm here if u ever wanna talk xxx

  • 11 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    Damn damn damn girl, I have missed your poem, but this was worth the waiting time, God This is briliant!!! If I could I would rate it 10...I relate so much and it's like you wrote the poem about my life...DAMN!!! EXCELLENT...Don't know what to say, you are the best writer ever...Love your poems hunni.
    I just hope that you are feeling better, well you know I am here for you, when your pain is too much to bare..

    Love always Sabrina

  • 11 years ago

    by ♥Leah♥

    First off, great poem. F A B U L O U S. this is probably one of the best i've ever even read on this website. it's that good. second, honey keep ur head up. ur poems are so intense that its kinda scary...don't want anything to happen to ya! again, i'm here for ya even tho ya don't even know me! lata. -leah

  • 11 years ago

    by Kaylee

    Aww I wish I could tell you life gets better, I want to so much.

    This poem was different because for the first time it hits realistically, emotionally, good depth in words, imagery, word choice, organization. Everything I look so hard to find in a poem is sitting right here. More truthful than the other poems I've read on one of the subjects mentioned.

  • 11 years ago

    by azlan26

    This is the saddest poem I've read for ages
    It made me so upset, it reminded me of some of my friends
    I mean the stanza
    "She's told me her secrets
    And all that she does
    But I remember so vaguely
    Who she really was "
    It was like you wrote it from my point of view!
    Truly talented =]

  • 11 years ago

    by Jenny

    Great poem, written with high emotions, though very sad. Keep writing : )

  • 11 years ago

    by Sole

    Yes - I have to admit, I can almost relate. Beautifully written - and he repeptition at the end gave the final stanza the power that it needed. Excellent work.

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 11 years ago

    by Jennifer

    OMG... DAMN....... I love this poem, and I love how its so emotional, and thats exactly how I feel too, I have to read more of ur poems, but take it easy, u can beat this, take care of urself!!!
    always jen

  • 11 years ago

    by x0xmissnLogiix0x

    That is great poem......it's a reminder.......

  • 11 years ago

    by xoxo Loz xoxo

    This is one of the most moving and strong poem I have ever read, its just wonderful writting, well done! I luved it!

  • 11 years ago

    by Kurt

    Beautiful and amazing. I can't describe how perfect this poem is.

  • Wow totally great poem good job...x0x nat xox

  • 11 years ago

    by britt

    Wow!!! that is really deep!!! i love it!!

  • 11 years ago

    by disha

    Its just so amazingly penned down thoughts...great work.
    its lovely.sad tho
    take care.