Holy crap, this poem was really good. I haven't read anything by you in a while love, but your still have the strong poetic voice I have come to love so strongly. Your style in this poem added to the impact of the poem, by talking about the girl that ended up being you. I was impressed and though the poem was long that didn't take away from how much a loved it.
I want to give you a hug hunni and let you cry in my arms.
I'll let you confess to another person about your addictions and self harm.
I won't judge you, because I have already walked the lonely road.
If you will give me a chance to assist you, I will try to lighten your load.
Nothing amazing, but just remember I love you! Best of luck sweetheart.
Damn damn damn girl, I have missed your poem, but this was worth the waiting time, God This is briliant!!! If I could I would rate it 10...I relate so much and it's like you wrote the poem about my life...DAMN!!! EXCELLENT...Don't know what to say, you are the best writer ever...Love your poems hunni.
I just hope that you are feeling better, well you know I am here for you, when your pain is too much to bare..
First off, great poem. F A B U L O U S. this is probably one of the best i've ever even read on this website. it's that good. second, honey keep ur head up. ur poems are so intense that its kinda scary...don't want anything to happen to ya! again, i'm here for ya even tho ya don't even know me! lata. -leah
Aww I wish I could tell you life gets better, I want to so much.
This poem was different because for the first time it hits realistically, emotionally, good depth in words, imagery, word choice, organization. Everything I look so hard to find in a poem is sitting right here. More truthful than the other poems I've read on one of the subjects mentioned.
This is the saddest poem I've read for ages
It made me so upset, it reminded me of some of my friends
I mean the stanza
"She's told me her secrets
And all that she does
But I remember so vaguely
Who she really was "
It was like you wrote it from my point of view!
Truly talented =]
OMG... DAMN....... I love this poem, and I love how its so emotional, and thats exactly how I feel too, I have to read more of ur poems, but take it easy, u can beat this, take care of urself!!!