Tradgic suicide

by Amberinaa   Apr 1, 2006


There once was a tale
a gloomy one indeed
of two lovers who's heart
for each other did bleed

An angel from above
decided they should be
she didn't realize she created
a suicidal tragedy

there love ran so deep
in the blood of their veins
they could never be apart;
tied together in chains

But see she was dying
and there was no cure
there was just to much pain
he had to endure

the angel sang a lullaby
and till death did they part
and forever he will have an
Aching pain in his heart

the lines took away the feeling
the blood too away the pain
he just kept cutting, and said
he would never hurt again.

alone and broken
silently he cried
and this is the tale
of his tradgic suicide.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Deana

    Your poems read like stories, that happens to be my favorite style. excellent write

  • 17 years ago

    by Fredaeya

    Thats sad but sween at the same time...*confused look* ur great at writing though and showing the reader the emotion ur feeling...keep it up! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by SilenceBreaksTheHeart

    That was an amazing poem...I loved it...very intense..keep it up.
    5/5
    Breanna

  • 17 years ago

    by *Beautiful Disaster*

    That was a really good poem.. i enjoy all of your poems your an amazing writer... thank you for the comment... maybe check out my other poem.. this poem is definately a 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by IVY

    That was really good . i loved the way it rhymed in some parts. COOL ! well check out some of my poems if you get the chance ..... later

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