Troubled P&Q Members (Multiple Senryu)

by †JustAri†   Apr 6, 2006


So many troubles
For young and old on this site
Can only see words,

Sometimes few faces
Threads, poems, and quotes screaming text
"I can't take it anymore!"

More mature ones say
That their time is way away
Crumpled and wasted

The younger ones cry
Because their unstable minds
Can't die soon enough

Too many problems
To be reached over the net
I can only hope...

...that there will come days
When young and old can live life
Without churned regret..

Copyright Ariana 2003-2006

*I'm just breaking through my writer's block...this poem was originally started on the twenty-first of April in 2005, and i have completed it today. Title reccomendations would be very much appreciated.

Senryu:
Of Japanese origin, a poem with a 5-7-5 syllabic count. Three Lines. Senryu usually have references to human nature, unlike haiku.

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  • 9 years ago

    by Natalie84

    Ari? I miss you!!!!!!

    I never read this poem but I must say I'm feeling it...

    I wish you'd come back!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by master of shadow

    This is a very well written peice, like the consept behind it

    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    Hey hey hey! haven't seen you in forever on the site and i'm glad your back and i'm glad your starting to break through your writer's block. get poem and i agree with what's said in the poem. sometimes it's just hard listening to all the same things that people say on this site and the sympathy cards they try to play. things on the nets are so hard to trust these days simply because they are words on a computer and there's no way of really knowing. but anyways before i go to far off topic, great poem

    ~Jacklyn