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by End Of Eternity May 2, 2006
Dark, fantasy /
5 (O) clock in the morning
& i hear a knock at my door
so pleased to see Satan
standing at the entrance floor
i realized that its time to go
so i quickly picked some pictures
kept them inside my heart
and flew away from this living curse
green valley and a ocean of wine
so excited to realize, this all is now mine
as i walked, mystified with nature's beauty
i asked myself, if this is the place we all want to be?
from further down the path i heard noise
as i came closer i got so shocked to see
Morpehus, Satan, Peter all sitting together
playing cards and were just waiting for me
so i jumped in & started playing
forgot about the place down below
where for my soul people were praying
death could be so fun, i never believed so
after a while i started wandering again
and i saw a big screen in a wide ground
today they were showing my funeral
and i could feel those unheard sounds
my love was standing near my clay
just staring at my numb face
i could feel she has so much to say
but for now she has lost the race
sometimes some visions do scare
so confused to name this one
a sweet dream or a nightmare
i hope to breathe again, when all this is done
This is really diffrent than what I am use to seeing from you. It is very good. You have really turned your writing in a very new direction. Excellent job!
by Wasted Fake Smiles
Wow gr8 poem, loveed it. 5/5! nice detail and stuff!
Woww greattt ,so different , loved reading it .
by Lost Soul 691
Great vivid imagery ... a different type of write!
I cant explain how gr8 it is satan would be proud and so i am keep ur works up or maybe ur real life cuz it seems true