Maliciousness (Tanka)

by End Of Eternity   Sep 15, 2012


Philosophical
Alcoholic sapience
Oh! maliciousness
Melodious threnody
Satisfies all my senses

Tanka is a classic form of Japanese poetry related to the haiku with 5, 7, 5, 7, 7 syllables.

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  • 8 years ago

    by Cindy

    It's so good to read one of your verses again yaar. You did great on this form. Your words cut to the heart. especially for those that have lived with alcohol in their lives....and it is very hard on a family who loves the person. Meena is so right. nice job!

  • 11 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    Well penned my friend! :D

  • 11 years ago

    by Giegielove Goddess Poet

    Nice one...liked! 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Alcohol not only destroys the person but those
    who are with that person too! This message
    shows the depth of what an alcoholic is..well penned!

  • 11 years ago

    by Ray Blue

    Great work Nitin, words of wisdom of alcoholism!

    5/5!

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