Sweat and Virgin Tears

Good choice of words
with verygood lines on it.
Very interesting write.

God Bless!

Wow, great write! It had such a powerful message! I loved the way you used your words it painted a wonderful picture in my mind!!! My favorite stanza was

"My thoughts shatter to oblivion,
although a million more remain.
Pieces fly across my brain,
making me feel insane.
Please don't look at me;
I won't let those
poisonous
lips touch
mine."

I loved the title! It drew my attention!!! 5/5!! Wonderful Job!!

Interesting write. Really it had been cool because the words had made it stand out. It was great on word choice because it was really just well done to bring about the imagery.
~Faith-less

Man...where do I begin?
First off, the ability to convey such a powerful message within the confines of not only one but three different poetry styles is astounding.
Then there's your flawless choice of words, pure brilliance. Each line delves deeper into the inner battles with what's being done to her against her will. Simply outstanding!
Take care and keep it up~Holly

I like the unpredictability in this poem, and the descriptions and especially the structure of it! (like the way you wrote it) I thought it was very cool. It seems as if you're oushing against something mentally and can't take it anymore. I love the emotion you portrayed here. Great job, but I sincerely hope that it's not true.